So far, in the novel, Eleven Days, by Lea Carpenter, a mom named Sara is grieving her son who went to war and was lost. Sara raised her son Jason to be a lover, not a fighter, but after 9/11 he is determined to join special forces and serve his country. The story reveals a lot about the bond between mother and son, through letters and emails while he is training. During the night of the raid on Bin Laden, Jason goes missing and Sara has no idea where he is. She is terrified, but at the very end of section 1 she hears that they have found him and he’s alive.
“He still calls her Mommy even though he is a man now. He is twenty-seven. He has been missing for nine days” (Carpenter 4). -- character, plot. This quote helped me understand a fundamental part of the relationship between Jason and Sara. It gives insight into Jason's character, and contrasts the nature of his involvement with the Navy SEALS. It provides a good example of both character and plot, by developing Jason early on to show who he is later on, and showing us something many people won’t know.
“The zucchinis grow so fast, she thinks. Like a child. If you do not watch them, they disappear into something else before your eyes” (Carpenter 8). -- simile, metaphor, hyperbole
“She looks out the window past Sam’s shoulders. She can see movement at the end of the drive through the trees and the rain, like a poorly lit silent film. Signifying nothing, she thinks” (Carpenter 59). -- simile, character, imagery
“But Sara felt the story was a parable of motherhood. We must love them, and then let them go. She wishes she’d had a chance to dip her son in that river. She would not have been as careless as Thetis” (Carpenter 75). -- character, juxtaposition, metaphor, plot. This quote shows Sara’s nature as a mother, and her feelings from the outside of Jason’s situation. She loves him so much that she let him do something that terrifies her, and thinks about him a lot. This is helpful to the novel because a majority of the first section is about their mother son relationship. This quote also provides a good example of character, showing Sara’s thoughts, and metaphor in the motherly nature between both stories.
The message about war in this novel is that however people might desire peace, the thirst for bloodshed is still alive and well in the world. Sara is symbolic of the desire for peace. Throughout she views Jason and his team mates as young boys, and she is scared for them. Jason is the noble warrior, fighting for something he didn’t think he’d have to fight for. Both Jason and Sara want peace in different ways. This is telling of the message, because they both want peace, but Jason is willing to fight against people who don’t.