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In “American Street” by Ibi Zoboi, the main character is a young Haitian illegal immigrant named Fabiola. Upon entering the U.S. , her mother and grandmother were both caught, with her grandma being deported and Fabiola last seeing her mother being detained. They were trying to get to Detroit to live with her Aunt Jo and her three daughters, Chantal, Pri, and Donna. Fabiola is hit by a massive culture shock in Detroit, and her imagined reality of the “American Dream” begins to break apart. She struggles to continue life in this new place without her mother for guidance, torn between a new place, new people, a boy she likes, and her cousins, she tries to persist in the streets of Detroit. The second part of the book continues to up the ante, and Fabiola faces many more challenges. She gets with her man, Kasim, and immediately they face hardship. He is friends with Donna’s boyfriend, Dray, and this becomes a dilemma when Fabiola is recruited by a detective to trace the death of a young girl via drug lacing back to Dray. Through her investigations she unveils a deep rooted drug ring, and discovers that it was her cousins, not Dray, that sold the drugs that killed the girl. Through this, she must worry about her mother in captivity, and how she either sells Dray out (or rather her cousins she finds out later) and loses her boyfriend, but gets her mom back, or she leaves her mother in captivity, keeps her boyfriend and family, and faces possible consequences from the government for not helping the detective. She spends her free time wishing her mother was there to advise her. 

A very similar thing happens in “The need for family reunification - to make families whole again” by Elizabeth Zion. Zion talks about her experience growing up without ever meeting her dad due to Ireland’s strict immigration policies. She recounts how she felt empty and horrible when thinking about how her father hasn’t gotten to see any of her accomplishments or milestones. She takes the subject and uses it to make a narrative pushing for a better immigration and customs system to prevent other families from being split as she and her father were. This connects when in the ted talk, Zion talks about how she wonders what it would be like to have her father there to help her, something that Fabiola mentions constantly throughout the book. They both show remorse that they can’t be with their family repeated, like in the book when Fabiola reminisces for Haiti, “I miss the hot sun and sweating all day and the beach and eating cold fresco with my friends and long walks up and down hills and Cola Lakay and deep-fried beef patties. I miss my mother.” (Zoboi 192) Or in the Talk when Zion wonders what it would be like to have her father for the first of many times, “And so I often imagine how different life would be if my father was here.” (Zion 1) 

So just like these characters, How do characters in your novel face separation from their family or friends? How do they handle this hardship? If they don’t face separation, how does their family support them in their lives?


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so far in my book - (timeline)

piquenia has given birth. 

pulga and Chico get into trouble with the local gang and don,failicio has been murdered. 

Pulga gets beat up by Chico and Piquenia starts making preparations to flee. they all board the bus to Guatamala city. continuing on foot towards Mexico til their picked up. 

at some point they reach Mexico and board a smuggler van to bring them a ways before they board a train. 

Chico dies falling off the train. 

they reach an encampment/homeless house. 

they make plans to cross the rest of the desert with another group. 

How do characters in your novel face separation from their family or friends? How do they handle this hardship? If they don’t face separation, how does their family support them in their lives?

in the book I read, 'we are not from here' by:T.J.Sanchez, the children of the family must flee their home town for their own safety. they end up confiding in each other with no adults around to confide in. they are even further separated as the youngest of them dies. the remaining oldest siblings then have to do everything they can to stick together and find stronger bonds though their shared mourning, and continued hellish journey. all they have left is each this ends up being the reason for a lot of their shortcomings and motivations. as they try to protect each other but also end up dragging each other down as they share resources.  

 

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Wow! that sounds like a very eventful story. What do you think would happen if the children had made it out with their parents?

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towards the end of the story we do get to see the appearance of an adult tho it is just one of their aunts. they help the kids out with a lot of the legal stuff and getting through a lot of other red tape in order to get them to the U.S. legally. I'm not Sure what would have happened if the rest of the adults would have joined them. 

tho I suspect that because of their increased numbers it may have made it harder for them to remain inconspicuous. they may have been found out before they even reached the final stop before their long trek to the border. 

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Your book sounds a little bit like mine. Both of our characters end up giving birth, along with one of the characters dying too. And with one of your characters Chico dies by falling off of a train, my character Ashoke ends up getting hurt in a train accident in the beginning of my book. 

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In Out of Nowhere by Maria Padian, the story follows Tom, a high school soccer player, whose life is turned upside down when a Somali refugee named Ahmed joins the team. Tensions rise as cultural differences, misunderstandings, and prejudice create conflict within the team and the town. As Tom gets to know Ahmed, he learns more about the struggles refugees face and begins to question his own beliefs.

A way Ahmed deals with separation from his family is still following the same religions and tradition they do, "and refugees a lot of times get even stricter about religion when they leave home" (Padian 196), This quote is showing refugees wanting to still follow the same religion. 

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I saw the same thing in my book, when Fabiola continues to pray to Haitian gods whilst in Detroit

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that's interesting. we didn't see any of the religious aspects in my book save for the few funerals that were help haphazardly while the protagonist where still on the run. 

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In my book the Namesake by Jhumpa Lahiri, the story follows Gogol, the son of two Indian immigrants named Ashoke and Ashima. When Ashoke and Ashima first move to the United States they both struggle with the guilt of leaving their family in Indian. Overtime Gogol begins to realize the sacrifices that his parents made when they moved to the United States. Gogol deals with the separation of his family back home in India and deals with the separation of his father after his father dies, “ ‘My husban is not there for an emergency. Only for a stomachace.’ ‘I’m sorry, Mrs. … Ganguli, is it?’ She listends to something about a heart attack, that it had been massive, that all attempts to revive him had failed.”(Lahiri 169). Gogol handles this hardship after his father dies by reflecting and accepting. After he accepts what has happened he soon goes back to his cultural roots.

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that sounds pretty similar to my book in the way the parents stayed behind themselves to assure their children made it to america

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that kind of separation occurred in my book too. after they had left their home for the border the three kids where very attached to each other as they where all they had left on their journey. after Chicos' death nothing could separate the remaining two. even to a fault when Pulga collapsed in the desert and Piquenia decided to stay behind and protect him while he recovered putting her own life at risk. 

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