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“Don’t feel sorry for refugees” by Luma Mufleh is about how refugees get taken out of their home and a lot of it is happening in Syria. She was talking about how it's hard for refugees to turn their life around when they aren't getting treated right and getting taken out of their homes.“ There are 65.3 million people who have been forcibly displaced from their homes because of war or persecution. The largest number, 11 million, are from Syria.(Mufleh)

In Refugee by Alan Gratz, my first character Josef’s father got taken by the Nazis and fast forwarding he got released while they were trying to escape Germany, they got on a boat and the captain is saying he'll bring them to the Netherlands, England,Belgium, and France. Josef and his family get brought to France and France gets invaded by the Nazis a few months later and their mom has to decide which child she'd rather keep because one of her two is getting taken away. My second character Isabel, her family and their neighbors go from the outside of Havana to Florida and they get their and can see the coast line the coast guard tries to stop them and one of the kids jump out of their boat to distract the coast guard so Isabel's mom can continue having her baby, after a long and hard process. My final character in my book is Mahmoud, Him and Josef ended up being with each other in Germany and so they became friends and Josef and his mother got taken by the Nazis and ended up dying in the concentration camp. Ruth Josefs sister promises shell help Mahmoud find Hana Mahmouds little sister. “I'm not staying in that place waiting for them to send me back to Serbia. Come on,” Mahmoud said. “We’re walking to Austria.”(Gratz 284)

The connection between the speech and my book is that my character, Mahmoud, lives in Syria and his house got bombed and they are currently trying to immigrate from Syria but its hard because everything they had got wrecked and it ruined their plan. With the speech she talks about how there are a lot of refugees getting taken from their homes or just getting their house bombed and nothing is happening about it.

Where in your novel have you seen examples of a character without choices or options? How did that impact their ability to succeed? What would need to change to prevent this from happening in the future?


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In my book Out of Nowhere by Maria Padian, the book is about a small town in Maine flooding with Somali refugees looking for a better way of life. The soccer team gets a jolt of inspiration and outstanding play from their new students who are very talented at the sport. The four Somali guys have a hard time with communication because they're non-English speaking, and that is a struggle for the teammates because communication is key. 

The characters in my book experience not having many options because of their language barrier. It's hard for Saaed to communicate because he's Somali and he understands a little bit of english. “ I slowed down, pronouncing each word carefully, but he still looked confused.”(Padian 16) that was Tom speaking because his coach asked him to help him because of the language barrier it would be hard to translate. Saeed will have to learn English at some point or at least know what words mean.

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Hi igreenwood25,

I have something similar In my book, one of my characters immigrates to the US and they kind of have a language barrier because they know English but not very well and they have to learn to adapt to the change of environment and the language barrier.

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In The Field Guy To The North American Teenager  By Ben Philippe, my character moved to Texas with his mother and he dislikes Texas and misses being in Canada and being able to see his father. He figures he needs a job so he gets a job at a barbecue place. Norris, who was struggling to find friends in Texas, gets into the football and cheerleader friend group because of a girl named Atari whom he started flirting. Norris and Atari are constantly fighting and arguing about going to prom with him. Norris Had begun drinking heavily and before he went to prom got drunk. At prom, he finds Atari with another guy making out and he tries to fight the guy and they begin arguing with her and all her friends. The days after prom all the people who thought he was friends stopped talking to him and he was constantly hungover and Ended up in jail, which led to his father bringing him back to Canada. 

my character hasn't had a situation where he did not have options or choices rather he always had a say in what he did this impacts how my character could succeed in that he can set himself up for success rather than someone else deciding for him “Mom, Dad, he looked back and forth between their faces which mirrored his own. Thank you for everything you've done for me. I want to go home now, please.”(Philippe 325). When he was given the chance to go back home at the end of the book or stay in Texas with his mother. 

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Hello lpinard25,

In my book I'm not dealing with a similar situation but Josefs parents are separated because his dad got taken away due to the Nazis because he was practicing his religion.

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In my book, The Other Americans, it tells the story of an African immigrant family and the revolves around the fact that the patriarch of the family is killed in a hit and run and there's nothing anyone can really do. "The one time Dad stays for close, he gets run over and killed?" (Lalami 5). This connects to the question in the post because they're powerless in this situation and what's done is done. 

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Hello Jdorman25,

In my book something similar happens because Josefs father got taken by the Nazis and there is nothing they can do about it, until he got released.

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In my book "Out of Nowhere" by Maria Padian, it talks about a young man named Tom Bouchard. Tommy was born and raised in Anniston, Maine. And goes to a predominantly white school with very little diversity. Tommy plays Soccer for his school and has made himself a household name with his soccer team. Tommy also has a girlfriend named Cherisse, Cherisse is a shallow and whiny girl, who in addition, Is a narcissist who wants his undivided attention 24/7. We are introduced to a young man named Saeed, Saeed is an immigrant who just recently immigrated to Maine. Saeed is a prodigy in soccer. Saeed is so good, he impresses the likes of Tommy. There is a College volunteer in Saeed's village. Her name is Myla. As the story progresses, we see the development of feelings that Tommy obtains for Myla, which subsequently ends Tommy and Cherisse’s superficial relationship. The story moves on some more, and we see the mayor of the town pass a public letter telling Somalis to stop immigrating to Maine. This causes an outrage in the city, causing protests around the state. It also prompts an investigation into Saeed’s background by journalist John LaVallee, who uses the Somali players’ uncertain official birthdates to question their eligibility for the soccer team. Saeed is promptly removed from the team for an allegation of age discrepancies on his green card, this leads Tommy to suspect a player named Alex Rhode’s father, Alex is on the soccer team. As a storm rages through Enniston, Tom receives news of Donnie’s car accident and hospitalization. At the hospital, he encounters Myla and Samira, who are there searching for the still-missing Saeed. Seeking answers, Tom finds Mr.Aden. Who is the school's cultural liaison. And finds out that he advised the family to leave Enniston. While at Myla’s college campus, Tom finds out about a group called “Stand Up Enniston”, a group opposing the church of the world. Tom gets involved with this group, and finds out that Saeed and Samira are Minneapolis. In a surprising turn of events. Uncle Paul, who used to preach prejudice, speech and bigotry. Shows his support for “Stand Up Enniston” by bringing Donnie in his wheelchair to his event.Somali student Ibrahim delivers a speech during the gathering, expressing camaraderie with his soccer team and acknowledging Tom’s impact on their lives. Reflecting on Saeed’s lasting influence, Tom realizes that Saeed’s presence will continue to be felt in his life forever.

 

A moment in my book where my characters were left with no choice was when Tom was filling out Saeed's Medical information for the soccer team, and put his personal doctor's information in order for Saeed to play. "Right. These people didn't have a doctor in town. There was no way Saeed was going to find one, schedule an appointment, and pass a physical before the season was half over." (Padian 19)  This impacted the way the soccer team performed since Saeed added Star power to a very much needed team. I don't think there was a way for this to be avoided in the future, unless a doctor's office opens up around the city of Enniston.

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