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agreen24
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RE: #3 Chick Red 4---pkay24

My book is different from yours because everything bad happens to your characters while my characters all find their ways in the world

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RE: #3 Chick Red 4---pkay24

If he looked like a stereotypical American I believe they'd treat him the same

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RE: #3 Chick Red 4---replacement E

I find your book to be very interesting because while your character's end up not having the chance to become their own people and cannot succeed in i...

2 years ago
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RE: #3 Chick Red 4---replacement E

In my book, All-American Muslim Girl by Nadine Jolie Courtney the main character is Allie. Allie is a Muslim, however she looks nothing like a Muslim....

2 years ago
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RE: #3 Chick Red 4---pkay24

In my book, All-American Muslim Girl by Nadine Jolie Courtney the main character is Allie. Allie is a Muslim, however she looks nothing like a Muslim....

2 years ago
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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---ccook24

I find your book to be very enthralling. Your character knows little about English and struggles by that a lot in school, while my character Allie kno...

2 years ago
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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---dhall24

That's very interesting with her knowing little English and getting pushed and pressured into learning English. It's very different to my book because...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---ccook24

I believe he wants her to hide her Muslim culture because he doesn't want her to experience being told off, disrespected, mistreated, and acted differ...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---dhall24

I believe things will get worse because Allie's boyfriend's dad is a immigrant hater and doesn't like Muslims. The two of them can become in conflict ...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---ccook24

In my book All-American Muslim Girl by Nadine Jolie Courtney, the main character is Allie. Allie has a Muslim father and a mother who turned Muslim. A...

2 years ago
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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---dhall24

In my book All-American Muslim Girl by Nadine Jolie Courtney, Allie has a Muslim father and a mother who turned Muslim. Allie looks nothing like a Mus...

2 years ago
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RE: #1 Chick Red 4---agreen24

What does her parents think of her working 5 jobs to pay off her tuition and a livable income? Are they supporting or helping her in any way?

2 years ago
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RE: #1 Chick Red 4---agreen24

Do you think Nick will go through with his dreams and become a baseball player?

2 years ago
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RE: #1 Chick Red 4---agreen24

Do you know why her mom would want a better life in America? Did something happen that made her want to move in hopes of a better life?

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Tips for a Smooth Transition “Two bodies snapping together like puzzle pieces, still fitting, new and familiar at once.” (Fallon 26) - Simile. Th...

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