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avoye24
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RE: Post Mortem Discussion #3

In the novel, The Far Away Brothers, Ernesto, and Raul are struggling, hard! They still have their coyote debt on their heads and are struggling to fi...

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RE: #2 Stubbs White 3----replacement C

My characters also had to flee their home but did not travel with their parents. But in my book, I have seen no clear language barriers.

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RE: #2 Stubbs White 3----replacement C

They do have a way to contact the parents. They gave them a "burner" phone before they left and have been in contact with them regularly.

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RE: #2 Stubbs White 3----dmcfarland24

This can relate to mine. Because my character's eating habits have also changed.

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RE: #2 Stubbs White 3----replacement C

My two characters are now on the run because they got into some trouble back in their home country El Salvador. A gang MS-13, one of the most powerful...

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RE: #2 Stubbs White 3----dmcfarland24

Besides the burgers, they have not been treated the best. The journey to America has been hard on them and they were treated the one time.

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RE: #2 Stubbs White 3----dmcfarland24

This relates very well to my novel. My two characters are now on the run because they got into some trouble back in their home country El Salvador. A ...

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RE: #1 Stubbs White 3---avoy24

I see how that relates to my novel, the gangs, and military cause terror and drive families out of their homes.

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RE: #1 Stubbs White 3---avoy24

Again I see the connection. Many people who may live in poor situations do anything they can to escape their situation. More often than not escaping t...

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RE: #1 Stubbs White 3---avoy24

I see how that relates to my book. War in El Salvador eventually created gangs and those gangs are the reason my two characters had to leave their cou...

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RE: Reading Response #6

They—they ’preciate what you did, Mr. Finch. They—they aren’t oversteppin‘ themselves, are they?” Atticus’s eyes filled with tears. He did not speak f...

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RE: Reading Response #5

Reverend Sykes leaned across me and whispered to Jem. “He got it caught in a cotton gin, caught it in Mr. Dolphus Raymond’s cotton gin when he was a b...

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RE: Reading Response #4

“What's rape, Cal?’ ‘It’s something you’ll have to ask Mr. Finch about,”(Lee 141). “He sighed and said rape is the carnal knowledge of a female...

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RE: Reading Response #3

In Chapter 9 of To Kill A Mockingbird, I see scout make a tough decision when she decides not to fight a boy at school. “My fists were clenched and I ...

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RE: Reading Response #2

In Chapter 5 of To Kill A Mockingbird, I see discrimination when Scout recalls a memory of Dill asking her to marry him, “He had asked me earlier in t...

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