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caustin25
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RE: 3. Group D---crobinson25 (Replacement C)

In my book there is not just a language barrier but a whole concept barrier as well. Throughout my book there is moments where some things just aren't...

8 months ago
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RE: 3. Group D - nperrier25 (teacher 3 replacement)

@mlevasseur-robbin25 this is pretty close to the relationship aspect of my book. like my book your characters have some advertise but throughout it al...

9 months ago
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RE: 3. Group D - nperrier25 (teacher 3 replacement)

This is lovely @cdavis25, I think our characters have a few things In common. Like fleeing to the US to escape where they were from and having some tr...

9 months ago
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RE: 3. Group D - nperrier25 (teacher 3 replacement)

In my book The Radius Of Us by Marie Marquadt I have two main characters Phoenix and Gretchen, they both have to deal with extremely difficult adversi...

9 months ago
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RE: Post Mortem #2

In Family Reunification by Elizabeth Zion is about how families sometimes get separated from there family's and it can be a good or bad thing dependin...

9 months ago
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RE: Post Mortem #1

Summary: Gretchen hasn't been the same since she got mugged in a parking lot late at night. She shortly after founds comfort in a boy named Phoenix wh...

10 months ago
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RE: Post Mortem #1

With Immigration comes all the additives that are with it, like the language barriers, the struggling of getting a green card and mostly housing and w...

10 months ago
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RE: 1. Group D - cdavis25

Wow I love this, in my book I also deal with violence and the characters trying to stay safe in a violent environment. Even through discrimination ins...

10 months ago
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RE: 1. Group D - cdavis25

My book The Radius Of Us by Marie Marquarot it shows a relationship that is interrupted by Latino gang violence. It also shows when the victims try an...

10 months ago
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RE: Fire and Forget Response

“Evie hates everything on Colin’s list. She does not kayak or hike or rock climb or scuba…. With a bitterness that surprises her, she suddenly wishes ...

1 year ago
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RE: The Things They Carried

The overall message about war for this story is that even though some soilders are in combat they dont nessiary like violance or have tolerance for it...

1 year ago
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RE: Fire and Forget Response

Fire and Forget “Her palm on his skin has the opposite effect. His breathing slows, his body stills,his sleep is quite again.”(Fallon 38) This quo...

1 year ago
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RE: War Novel Response 3

In this part of my novel, halftime starts, and Billy shortly notices how halftime isn't going well when Lodis starts slurring his words and not knowin...

1 year ago
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RE: War Novel Response 2

In this part of my novel Billy is hanging out with his friends when the cheerleaders start to get involved and one specifically catches his eye. Billy...

1 year ago
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RE: War Novel Response 1

In the novel Billy Lynns Long Hafttime Walk by Ben Fountian, Billy faces troubles of coming home from war and the citizens being ungrateful for his se...

1 year ago
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