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cdavis25
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RE: 3. Group E--llanglois25

This sounds very traumatic for Arsalan. Does he end up getting his confidence back? How does this happening impact his development through the rest of...

9 months ago
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RE: 3. Group E--llanglois25

This story sounds sad. Did Oscar experience any regret or guilt after leaving the Dominican Republic the first time and not closing things with her?

9 months ago
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RE: 3. Group D - nperrier25 (teacher 3 replacement)

The cinema burning down sounds traumatic. Did your character experience any more adversity from that? Any more stress?

9 months ago
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RE: 3. Group D - nperrier25 (teacher 3 replacement)

In my book, The Only Road, by Alexandra Diaz, a 12 year old boy and his 15 year old girl cousin flee Guatemala to live with the boy's brother in Texas...

9 months ago
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RE: 3. Group D---crobinson25 (Replacement C)

In my book, The Only Road, by Alexandra Diaz, a 12 year old boy and his 15 year old girl cousin flee Guatemala to live with the boy's brother in Texas...

9 months ago
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RE: 2. Group E - rblackwell25

Does Arsalan struggle to connect with Beenish too? How much does this impact the rest of his life, his mental health? Do you see their relationship de...

10 months ago
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RE: 2. Group E - rblackwell25

Do Saeed and Nadia have a good support network? Has voicing their opinions to others gotten them in trouble before? Is this a positive or a negative i...

10 months ago
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RE: 2. Group D - mlevasseur-robbins25

Are Michael's parents sort of antagonists in your book? If they are anti-immigration does that cause conflict between Michael and his parents?

10 months ago
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RE: 2. Group D--CAustin25 (Replacement B)

In my book, The Only Road, by Alexandra Diaz, a 12 year old boy and his 15 year old girl cousin flee Guatemala to live with the boy's brother in Texas...

10 months ago
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RE: 2. Group D - mlevasseur-robbins25

In my book, The Only Road, by Alexandra Diaz, a 12 year old boy and his 15 year old girl cousin flee Guatemala to live with the boy's brother in Texas...

10 months ago
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RE: 1. Group G - arivet25

In my book, The Only Road, by Alexandra Diaz, Jaime and his cousin Angela flee Guatemala to live in New Mexico with Jaime's brother after a gang, call...

10 months ago
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RE: 1. Group D - cdavis25

I've noticed something similar in my book, it is very hard to leave things in the past. Jaime and Angela also try very hard to get away from the gangs...

10 months ago
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RE: 1. Group D - cdavis25

In my book, Jaime and Angela also face discrimination from other people, even from their own country. Other Guatemalans judge them for running away fr...

10 months ago
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RE: The Things They Carried

The story I chose to write about was The Man I Killed, by Tim O’Brien. A quote that shows imagery is “His neck was open to the spinal cord and the ...

1 year ago
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RE: War Poetry

In the poem When I am 19 I Was a Medic, by D.F. Brown, the two most important literary devices I found were imagery and juxtaposition. “I can t...

1 year ago
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