In my story “Indivisible” by Daniel Aleman, there is a boy and a young girl that start the book by living with their family. Their mother and father o...

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In my story “Indivisible” by Daniel Aleman, there is a boy and a young girl that start the book by living with their family. Their mother and father o...

In my story “Indivisible” by Daniel Aleman, there is a boy and a young girl that start the book by living with their family. Their mother and father o...

In my story “Indivisible” by Daniel Aleman, there is a boy and a young girl that start the book by living with their family. Their mother and father o...

I also feel that if your mother in your story, had someone to look up to or to share with confidently. she would be more confident and be able to live...

So maybe if Tj was able to come the consensus of not being able to please everyone. She would be able to take her friend as a mentor for the friend gr...

In my story Mateo, my main character had a hard time fitting in with his new classmates when he first moved. He was able to find people that where mor...

In my story “Indivisible” by Daniel Aleman, there is a boy and a young girl that start the book by living with their family. Their mother and father o...

In my story “Indivisible” by Daniel Aleman, there is a boy and a young girl that start the book by living with their family. Their mother and father o...