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RE: 2. Group I---DLeonard25 (Replacement B)

What is the context behind your quote? Is Nick the one speaking? Who is he speaking to? What does this help you better understand about what's expecte...

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RE: Post Mortem #1

Add to your summary. I need more information about who your characters are, what events they each go through, and how they deal with this conflict. A ...

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RE: 2. Group H--GSpier25 (Replacement B)

If your father-character Phuc seems to be assimilating well, why do you think he beats Jane? What's his motivation behind it? What does it seem like h...

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RE: 2. Group I---DLeonard25 (Replacement B)

For part of my book, Phuc has the same impression of his parents at the start of my book. As things progress, he realizes that his father is trying to...

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