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RE: 2. Group I---DLeonard25 (Replacement B)

What is the context behind your quote? Is Nick the one speaking? Who is he speaking to? What does this help you better understand about what's expecte...

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RE: Post Mortem #1

Add to your summary. I need more information about who your characters are, what events they each go through, and how they deal with this conflict. A ...

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RE: 2. Group H--GSpier25 (Replacement B)

If your father-character Phuc seems to be assimilating well, why do you think he beats Jane? What's his motivation behind it? What does it seem like h...

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RE: 2. Group I---DLeonard25 (Replacement B)

For part of my book, Phuc has the same impression of his parents at the start of my book. As things progress, he realizes that his father is trying to...

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RE: 2. Group D--CAustin25 (Replacement B)

Sounds scary and stressful. My book deals little with what the family's travel experiences were like, but because their country was in war, it was les...

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RE: 2. Group H--GSpier25 (Replacement B)

bboone25, does Saeed have a job? Would it be easy for him to get one if he doesn't? How does the community receive the Somalian immigrants? Are they h...

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RE: 2. Group H--GSpier25 (Replacement B)

ahatala25, in your opinion which do you think is more difficult for Saeed to navigate: coming from a war-torn country to a place where most people hav...

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RE: 2. Group D--CAustin25 (Replacement B)

Sounds like a lot of what's happening in your book is looking at the political focus. I'd love some more information on your story. For example, ...

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RE: 2. Group I---DLeonard25 (Replacement B)

It's fairly similar in my book. Phuc isn't struggling completely, but he doesn't handle social situations the way he "should" or seems to be handled b...

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