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RE: #1 Chick Red 1---replacement A

Add a citation to your quote. Do you think that Enrique, because he's had to fight regularly to try to achieve his goals, has more skills to cr...

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RE: #1 Chick Red 1---slane24

Add a citation to quote and the book title and author to a comment for full credit.

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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---replacement C

I love this example because it just shows what things are emphasized in a different culture. Phuc, in my book, has a family who is working hard to ass...

2 years ago
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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---replacement C

Can you copy and paste this in the Red 1 Replacement C post, so I can grade it effectively? I'll offer comments there and delete this one.

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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---replacement C

Can you explain what book you're reading and what the story is about? Who in your book has to learn how to speak English? What process do they go thro...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 1---replacement D

I love this example because I think that too often we're looking at the ways Americans are getting in immigrants' way, not immigrants getting in their...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 1---replacement C

I like how you have a comparison between Chuna and Lena, to show that she's making comparisons between herself and others. I think this is how every s...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---replacement D

Can you give a more complete summary of your book so far? Who the speaker of the quote is and what they've been through? Then, can you expand on...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---replacement D

This is such a good example of how there are always two sides to see things. At one point in my story Phuc gets all excited to go see the movie Chari...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 4---replacement D

I love this example because Abdi is such an important character in your book. Since he's younger than Samira and Saeed, he has a little more time to l...

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RE: #2 Chick Red 1---replacement C

I feel this is a recurring theme we're seeing a lot in these type of stories. Immigrant children are constantly struggling with ways to help determine...

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