I would give up internet and using social media. Everyday people waste most of their day away on YouTube, snap chat, Instagram ETC. If i gave up socia...

Great work, lots of good turning moments that really exemplified how you felt while growing up. I too can understand how you feel about growing up, an...

This shows dedication, I really like how you mention that the garage hasn't been cleaned since you moved in. This made me realize that not only does i...

After receiving my license to drive my car, this is when I realized I like adventuring. One thing about my car is that it is old and slow. I am only 1...

dogs are considered bad hygiene and a bad disease this is why they dont have dogs. and the characters in this book also deal with having to assimilate...

Good point, very relatable. my character gets support from peers aswell

thank you for the good points. I can live the rest of my life satisfied knowing you responded to my reply. ? ?

It is very difficult for an immigrant to become their own person. They´re constantly worried about being judged or not assimilating. There are times w...

My character does better when he has support from other people. Saeed (The character in my book) Gets help from another character tom, tom helps him w...

Im reading the same book and I thought these were great observations and points!

I think toms uncle expects a lot out of him thats why he pressures him. I dont think tom can say anythin to make his uncle stop because his uncle is s...

Yes its true! very good observation!

This was a really good point, very well organized. You did a good job describing her mom and describing her lifestyle.

In my novel one of the main characters Tom gets pressured a lot from his uncle. His uncle is a blue collar worker that expects a lot out of Tom. ¨Am I...

People shouldn't have to try and assimilate if theyre from another place in the world. In my book A character named Saeed has to assimilate and try an...