I really enjoyed how you started your piece with a broader understanding, then went into your personal example, and then ended it with a lesson. It al...

I really enjoyed how you used something so simple as an ice maker and was able to take it and show the bigger picture. All of the time, people take si...

Your piece is able to connect to people all around. When I was younger, I moved around a lot and I am very lucky to have settled in the house that I c...

Ever since I started elementary school, I knew that I was ready to be a senior. I know at seven years old, I could not be a senior. I wasn’t mature en...